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Author Never Dies - poem analysis by Connie Smith

Author Never Dies by Riyas Qurana is a poem that utilizes the metaphor of “the bird” to express how elusive writing and wording can be in the grand scheme of the author’s world. The choice of Qurana’s wording creates a sardonic atmosphere that infuses into the lines, and the overall poem comes as a warning to authors to wait for the right wording, no matter how evasive it is, since forcing ideas and phrasing can lead to a subpar product. Qurana claims that he has forced this “bird” into his “text,” and the result was that the writing did not come to be. In the end then, this is guidance and advise from one writer to another. You can read the full poem here Author Never Dies - Poem by Riyas Qurana That there is no bird in the in the text written on a bird You need not feel amazed. For our need For our urgency We cannot compel the bird to come at once It may be having some important chores Or the texts might surface as suits their whims and fancies There are no rules that dictate

that we should place the bird inside the text and read it. It is not proper to have it caged inside the text. If it likes your way of reading sometimes the possibility of it getting into the text willingly comes to be. Seeing some bird flying high please don't conclude that it should be the one to stay within the text. That one which hovers so closely going round the texteven that needn't be the bird for the text. Not just of the bird inside the text I wrote causing it to exit too. True, away from anyone's hear Wandering in silence shrilling silently

wanders the bird of the text.

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Author Never Dies Analysis Lines 1-6 Qurana begins describing the writing process by utilizing the metaphor of “a bird.” Though he does not state what “the bird” is a representation of, the reader can infer “the bird” is a physical symbol of the written word for an author. This concept is clear through the description given in regard to “the bird.” Qurana states that “there is no bird…in the text written on a bird,” and the concept seems almost contrasting and cyclical. When added to the words that follow this proclamation, that “[y]ou need not feel amazed” by the absence of “the bird,” the wordplay makes more sense in regard to writing.

For a writer, inspiration might not come as soon as they sit down at a computer to write a story, and there are numerous reasons why the words would be stunted in the process of trying to create a book, short story, or poem. While there are plenty of words in written works, those words are not so immediate in becoming the final product. In fact, when a writer begins the process of constructing a written work, there is not one word provided at the initial state.

If words, then, are “bird[s],” what Qurana is saying is that “there is no [word]…written on a” finished product at the beginning of the process. Those words must be acquired through time and frustration as writers cannot “compel [them] to come at once.” In fact, the repetition in “in the in the text” could be an example of the awkwardness that can come when “the bird” has yet to show its face and lead the writer to the correct wording.

Words, overall, are not at writers’ beck and call since they care not for “need” or “urgency.” Like a bird flying high in the sky, ever striking and admirable, those words are elusive to writers’ methods of catching them and able to fly near or far at their own “whims.” Lines 7-12 This series of lines builds the already noted concept of words being as evasive as “a bird,” even going so far as to mock the concept of the evasiveness by commenting that “[i]t may be having some important chores.” Clearly, the written word has no “chore” since it is not a physical being with such responsibilities, so there is a satirical quality to the concept that grants the poem a sardonic feel. Qurana’s complaints about the elusiveness feel more like amused commentary with this addition to the reflection.

Once this amused tone is embraced, Qurana returns to commenting on the general evasiveness of words when writing by saying they “might surface as suits their whims and fancies,” which builds on the metaphor of “the bird” without mentioning “the bird” anywhere in lines 7-10. These traits are representative of a living being, like “a bird,” so since words cannot have “whims and fancies,” the metaphor is embraced through ideas even when the noun of “the bird” itself is not mentioned.

The final ideas of this section could prove a bit puzzling to the reader when Qurana states that “[t]here are no rules that dictate that we should place the bird inside the text and read it.” However, there are two concepts that could be the rationale for this section.

One is a furthering of the metaphor between words and “the bird.” Like a bird does not need to be “caged,” there is no regulation to declare that works of fiction have to be penned in a specific format—or at all. If the reader embraces that metaphor, the parallel showcases a beauty and familiarity that is possible by corralling those words into a focused format. Just as a pet bird can be a beautiful sight in a person’s home, the words that are assembled in this unnecessary fashion can create a beautiful, noteworthy sight. Although there is no need to catch those words to “write” or “read,” there is contentment to be found in doing so.

If the reader, however, looks at this in a precisely different manner, the metaphor of the “cage” becomes a method of criticism, as if the writer who forces the words to form in an involuntary and strained manner will have a final product that is as tame and restricted as “a bird” that knows only a “cage.” While “a bird” that flies freely might live a majestic life of openness and maneuverability, the “caged” animal cannot explore wide open territories because of the confinements around it. If this is Qurana’s meaning, it is commentary that even though the words can be elusive, they should still not be forced, for the sake of a more lively and pleasant final product.

Lines 13-18 This series of lines clears up any kind of uncertainty regarding how the “rules” concept should be taken. In fact, Qurana states his intention of bringing up the lack of “rules” for writing when he says that “[i]t is not proper to have it caged inside the text.” What this means is that, like “a bird” that will never know the freedom that comes outside of a “cage,” a written work will never reach its full potential if filled with words that are forced and dictated.

An odd twist comes into play when Qurana comments that “[i]f it likes your way of reading,” “the possibility of it getting into the text willingly comes to be.” Since the poem is about the elusiveness of the writing process, commenting that the words could start forming in connection to “reading” is an unusual change. Granted, in an earlier line, Qurana references the process of “reading” in connection to there being “no rules,” but “reading” what has been written is different than writing because of “reading.”

It could be though that Quran is referencing the prospect of gaining inspiration and insight from other authors. If such is the case, by pausing to “read” the works of other authors, a new writer’s style could form in a way that allows words to come more fluidly as that new writer learns what does and does not work. In this, claiming “the bird” would come nearer in connection to “reading” makes sense. Inspiration has happened, and there is no need to force those words “into the text” like “a bird” that must be in a “cage.”

Lines 19-24 Qurana turns to pleading with the reader in Line 20 to ask that they “please [not] conclude” “some bird flying high” should be assumed as “the one to stay within the text.” What this means is that an author should not try to force something that seems appealing or regal into their writing should those appealing and regal concepts not fit within the context. Similarly, the easy method of writing should also not be embraced as “the bird” that “hovers so closely” is not necessarily “the bird for the text” either. The wording should fit the product, not the easy fix or the ideal vision. Lines 25-30 In this final series of lines, Qurana seems to say he has tried at some point to force his wording, writing “[n]ot just of the bird,” and his inspiration to write left him in response. Specifically, this tactic to force the wording “caus[ed the bird] to exit.” With this concept in mind, this poem takes on a feeling of warning toward writers. If Qurana is speaking from experience, after all, his words are a declaration of what could happen if words are mistreated in writing. The product, it seems, is so ill-represented that it falls to pieces without inspiration and care.

The final lines return to the “whimsy” of earlier ones to claim “the bird” is “[w]andering in silence” in the aftermath of the loss of inspiration. There is no physical representation of this concept that is applicable to what happens when inspiration leaves since inspiration itself is not a living being to “wander” anywhere, but the visual fits well with the metaphor of “the bird.” That “bird” can “wander,” “shrilling silently” into the open night if it escapes from its “cage” of confinement. Words, however, might only slip from the mind so that the quality of a work lessens from attempting to force something unnatural into “the text.” There is no logical reason to assume the words or inspiration travel from the

mind of the writer to find a new one to inspire, but the unrealistic notion solidifies the flightiness of words in comparison to the freedom of “the bird.” It also hints that even should one writer fail, another writer will be able to carry on the profession so that authors, as the title says, “never die.”

Essentially, this is a poem that embraces a sardonic atmosphere where words are given unrealistic traits to establish the parallel with “a bird,” leading the reader to one striking conclusion. While writing, forcing words can be a crucial fault, just like “cag[ing]” an animal that should be free. Qurana, in the end, is telling the reader to wait for the elusive words to “surface” since forcing them can be as unpleasant of an experience as being “caged” is for a bird.

About Riyas Qurana Little information about Qurana can be found online, but he is the author of over a dozen poems. Much of his work is similar to “Author Never Dies” in that the metaphor of “the bird” appears in a number of his poems as well as the elusiveness of words for a writer. Overall, these seem to be concepts he is concerned with enough to continually elaborate upon.

Connie Smith More from this Author Connie L. Smith spends a decent amount of time with her mind wandering in fictional places. She reads too much, likes to bake, and might forever be sad that she doesn’t have fairy wings. She has her BA from Northern Kentucky University in Speech

Communication and History (she doesn’t totally get the connection either), and her MA in English and Creative Writing. In addition, she freelances as a blogger for topics like sewing and running, with a little baking, gift-giving, and gardening having occasionally been thrown in the topic list.

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Love Is Not A Word by Riyas Qurana I am a forest When I smile, It goes near the pond And is growing as a mountain

If I wink It becomes a whirlwind Falling hairs swept away by waves As streams and rivers And the eyes bouncing in them Multiply as fish.

Imagination makes the mind Flying non -stop only with wings Without the bird As the forest shakes with the tireless Cry of the peace (silence?)

Amidst all this I keep a falling flower in the mid-air Not to fall on the earth

Is it not up to you who search for it To come and sit on it And make love?

Don't forget to bring the word Darling When you come.

Love Is Not A Word by Riyas Qurana is a free verse poem, written in first person, using the voice of a personified love. In its six stanzas, this poem dives into the notion of love and what is needed to maintain it in relationships. Qurana uses metaphors based on nature to emphasize the reality of love and how natural it is for us to experience it; so much so that we can relate it so easily to the world and elements around us. He also uses the title of the poem to hint the speaker, whilst clarifying the ambiguous final stanza of his poem.

Love Is Not A Word – Analysis by Noor Rehman Stanza One

I am a forest When I smile, It goes near the pond And is growing as a mountain

The first stanza of this poem opens with a short line emphasizing the metaphor of love being a forest. This is significant in understanding Qurana’s idea of love. Similar to a forest, love is a place for growth, nourishment and housing. Not only does love itself grow, but a person who experiences love (romantic or non romantic) grows very in sync with his/her emotions. Moreover, a person who is loved becomes emotionally nourished through having his/her natural desire fulfilled of being cared for, needed and wanted.

Just as a forest is a home to many living things, love is also a home to many emotions such as happiness, loyalty, and contentment. The stanza then, continues on to say that when this forest smiles “it goes near the pond / and is growing as a mountain”. A pond is a still body of water, which helps to be aware of the idea that when love “smiles” or is in an environment of happiness it touches those people who are still and unmoving in their emotions; perhaps lacking love altogether. Associating love with a mountain, especially in relation to the growth of a mountain is very out of the ordinary, as at first thought one would not associate a mountain with the idea of growth or growing. Mountains are known for their vast sizes and being very solid and stationary; however, on further inspection it is realized that mountains are not of only one size nor do they all stay that way, because they do indeed grow in size. This is very relevant to love as Qurana is depicting it; it is vast in size, strong and sometimes when you think your love cannot grow, it in fact, does.

Stanza Two

If I wink It becomes a whirlwind Falling hairs swept away by waves As streams and rivers And the eyes bouncing in them Multiply as fish.

Continuing with the theme of nature, the second stanza also plays with metaphors and imagery from our natural environment. Winking is an action typically used in situations of secrecy or humor; by having the second stanza initiate with the personification of love in the action of winking Qurana introduces the powerful image of a “whirlwind”. It is obvious that when love is connected to secrecy or humor it will create circumstances that could easily be described as whirlwinds. The mention of “falling hairs” in line seven also coincides with the dramatic imagery of the whirlwind and actually helps emphasize it as well. The stanza concludes with the idea that “the eyes bouncing” in the “streams and rivers” “multiply as fish”; this is an interesting concept especially when “eyes” here symbolize society’s speculations, standards and ideas. When love is mixed with secrecy, humor or both, it creates quite a messy scenario causing other people to meddle, or society’s standards in general to complicate and amplify the already complex emotion of love.

Stanza Three

Imagination makes the mind Flying non -stop only with wings Without the bird As the forest shakes with the tireless Cry of the peace (silence?)

The first three lines of the third stanza explore the idea of flying without wings. This is important to the overall subject of love for the simple and obvious reason that the powerful sensation of love breaks borders and takes people through a level of emotional awareness that they have never previously experienced. Experiencing true and sincere love is often described as flying without wings. It is an invigorating and liberating sensation for those who have the opportunity to indulge in it. The final two lines of this stanza investigate the notion that the “cry” of a persistent love is usually silent. Here, Qurana is exposing the reality of the love that most of us experience. When an individual dives into a relationship that grows from love ( romantic or otherwise), usually he/she is “tireless” in this venture. No matter what obstacles and difficulties present themselves in their endeavor of love, a person will persist, clinging on to the hope of success and survival. Most of this resilience in their relationships will be silent to the outside world; presenting themselves in “peace” and others will accept it as a result of their silence on the matter.

Stanza Four

Amidst all this I keep a falling flower in the mid-air Not to fall on the earth

The fourth stanza consists of just three lines. These lines implore the reader to pause and linger over the idea of this flower that love has held in mid air. What exactly is this flower that love will not let “fall on the earth” no matter the strength of the whirlwinds, waves and fish? This flower symbolizes hope. Amongst the intensity and severity in relationships and circumstances that love can bring, is the “flower of hope” that love claims it will not let “fall”. Hope is a very essential element in the emotional investment of love. Without hope no relationship that stems from love (which we can safely say is most relationships) can survive, as it binds the individuals to each other, allowing them to hold on to something through the times of testing and chaos which inevitably come in the company of love.

Stanza Five

Is it not up to you who search for it To come and sit on it And make love?

This stanza also consists of just three lines and continues the topic of hope. At this point, the personified love is posing a question. It asks people that “is it not up to” those searching for hope in their love to “come and sit” on hope “and make love?” There are a few important things to note in this question. Firstly, we notice that by directing a question to the readers, Qurana is emphasizing the authoritative nature and presence of love. Secondly, he enforces the idea that the hope that people look for in their

relationships is something that the individuals have to “sit on” or stand firmly with, because their relationships are at a loss without it. Lastly, it is peculiar that love is speaking of “making love”; Qurana is highlighting the fact that love takes effort and work, it needs to be made. Love is made through effort and hope of fulfilment and it does not guarantee success.

Stanza Six

Don’t forget to bring the word Darling When you come.

The final stanza of this poem concludes with very ambiguous last three lines. It seems to be advice from our personified love, “to bring the word” when we come. The end of this poem could probably be interpreted to mean a number of different things. The title of this poem Love Is Not A Word gives us the clarification that “the word” here is not meant to mean love. So what exactly could it be asking or rather advising the reader to bring when the opportunity to experience love arises? The answer is commitment. This is evident as commitment is something that unfortunately not many people bring to their relationships and is something that only fortunate people find in their relationships and love. Commitment is a critical component to the survival of love, so it makes perfect sense for love to advise people to make sure we “don’t forget” it. Also by addressing the

reader as “darling” Qurana reminds us that the speaker is not only personified love but in fact speaks with love too.

Noor Rehman More from this Author Noor has an Honours in the Bachelor of Arts with a double major in English Literature and History. She teaches elementary and high school English, and loves to help students develop a love for in depth analysis, and writing in general. Because of her interest in History, she also really enjoys reading historical fiction (but nothing beats reading and rereading Harry Potter!). Reading and writing short stories and poetry has been a passion of hers, that she proudly carries from childhood.

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Not To Step Into The Arena Of Poetry Just On Request by Riyas Qurana He would have been willing To take me into arena of his poetry Visited, alas! nothing seen, it was empty when words are opened. as often thus happened. Only when he takes me into arena of his poetry Everything seen disappeared

He confessed.

He looked at me Being confused in mind.

No one gives birth to a poem I said. And poems never await Just for reading. The poem can not be detained for long Said I further.

He seems not believing me. No poem to identify among words. Innovative thoughts enter into and become poem when you read each time and they find their way out when you finished reading, I said.

Just now, he has found his way out Breaking my friendship. Locking all his words And leaving me behind Without giving the key I broke open the words into pieces In anger Then I found only poems, If you do not trust me, Break these words and see. Not To Step Into The Arena Of Poetry Just On Request by Riyas Qurana is a poem about a deteriorating friendship of the narrator, due to the misinterpretations of their personal poetic territory. As the title of this poem suggests, Qurana strongly feels that you cannot “step” into someone else’s poetic territory even if requested because one can never receive the words of a poem the same as another person. He feels that each individual poem is a unique form of art that cannot be reproduced especially in the interpretation of each peace. The narrator in this poem is presented with a very strong voice and opinions that he does not wish to compromise. He is also very quick to judge and label the thought process of his friend, letting the readers know that this account of the conflict is very heavily biased due to his anger. The main idea that the narrator presents is that no one can hope to be welcomed into someone else’s “arena of poetry”

because the words of the poet have a life of their own and do not stay the same for anyone.

Not To Step Into The Arena Of Poetry Just On Request Analysis . Critic by Noor Rehman

First Stanza

He would have been willing To take me into arena of his poetry Visited, alas! nothing seen, it was empty when words are opened. as often thus happened. Only when he takes me into arena of his poetry Everything seen disappeared He confessed.

This stanza begins with a complaint from the speaker in this poem. The narrator’s hopes of understanding his friend through his poetry is quickly extinguished as he realizes that everything has “disappeared”. This stanza exposes the conflict that unfolds

in the poem. A friend of the narrator seems to have wanted to share his poetry with him but is unable to get across his ideas and words. This is an interesting concept as it highlights that each individual perceives emotions, ideas and words differently and furthermore, interprets them in a unique way that cannot be reproduced for anyone else. Consequently, when an individual introduces their poetic territory or “arena” to another, and invites them to accept the words as they themselves felt and expressed them, this “arena” becomes “empty”. Qurana states that this happens “often” as people expect others to understand the world around them the way they themselves do, since it is the only way they can comprehend it. The last line of this stanza demonstrates that the friend or acquaintance in this poem is realizing that his poetic territory has “disappeared” in the presence of the narrator. As he confesses this realization to the narrator, it indicates to the reader that the narrator is presenting himself of superior persona by implying, that he seems to understand this concept while his friend does not. By the use of the word “confessed”, Qurana immediately enforces a negative connotation to the situation, insinuating that his friend was realizing a mistake.

Second Stanza

He looked at me Being confused in mind.

This is the only couplet in the poem, emphasizing the importance of the words it carries. Although this is the smallest part of the poem, it cuts into incredibly substantial ideas. The first line discusses communication; “He looked at me” after the confession from his

friend, this “look” exposes that Qurana is trying to emphasize the idea that a person’s facial expressions speak volumes about their thought process especially when it comes to communicating those thoughts to others. The reason this line is so significant, is because it calls attention to the fact that is poem is truly about the two individuals and their understanding of each other, rather than the poetic territory that they are exploring together. Moving on to the second line of this couplet, the reader is again, met with the indication that the narrator is depicting himself to be more superior than his friend seeing that he is confused even after his “confession”. The noteworthy point in the second line is that Qurana stresses that the friend or acquaintance is “confused in mind”, putting an emphasis on the idea that it was his mind that was still confused, even if he had outwardly confessed his realization. The clarification that the narrator makes about the friend’s mind being confused, essentially speaks volumes about his own mind. He seems to believe that he has a greater understanding of his friends mind, and can label it as a confused mind given that it does not match with the way he perceives the situation. Third Stanza

No one gives birth to a poem I said. And poems never await Just for reading. The poem can not be detained for long Said I further.

Stanza three starts out with the notion of giving “birth” to a poem. Giving birth is a process that not only assists in the construction of families, but also gives a position of ownership or right of possession to the one who gave birth. The narrator swiftly strips away the right of possession of a poem from his friend as he tells him that “no one gives birth to a poem” in the opening line of the stanza. This line also continues to draw attention to the overbearing attitude that the narrator has had throughout this poem. He carries on teaching his friend about the nature of poems and poetic territory by explaining that poems never exactly “await just for reading” and “cannot be detained for long”. These concepts help the reader understand Qurana’s idea of poetry and poetic territory. He seems to claim that no one can own a poem seeing that a poem will never just wait around to be read. Essentially, Qurana is implying that once a poet writes out a poem, it no longer belongs to him in the sense that the way readers will perceive, understand and interpret those words will never be identical to what he had initially intended. The poem then never stays the same and so can never be truly “owned” by anyone, it is its own entity free of ownership. Furthermore, when you try to share that poem with others you lose all control over it. It no longer says “detained” in your mind and becomes a new story for every individual who comes across it. On the occasion that words are strung together to form a poem, it is only a matter of time before they are shared with others and eventually freed from the poet. Fourth Stanza He seems not believing me. No poem to identify among words. Innovative thoughts enter into and become poem

when you read each time and they find their way out when you finished reading, I said.

The fourth stanza of Qurana’s poem maintains the domineering voice of the narrator as he continues to educate his friend about the nature of poetry. The first line stating that he is not being believed furthermore emphasizes the unremarkable image that the narrator has been painting of his friend. The narrator tries to explain that words are not poetry, your “thoughts enter” into the words adding emotion and meaning behind them converting the simple words into a poem, which when read “find their way out” into the world with their diverse meanings for the various readers that encounter this poem. Through this stanza it becomes evident that the narrator has a very strong opinion on what a poem is and refuses to accept the fact that others might not identify with it the same way. Fifth Stanza

Just now, he has found his way out Breaking my friendship. Locking all his words And leaving me behind Without giving the key I broke open the words into pieces

In anger Then I found only poems, If you do not trust me, Break these words and see.

This last stanza not only concludes the poem but also concludes the friendship of the two characters in the poem. The very first line in the stanza exposes that his friend has “found his way out” of the friendship and apparently locked up “all his words”. This description relates to the readers that because of their difference in understanding of poetic territory the friendship of the characters has fallen out. It seems that the narrator was not able to comprehend the ideas from his friend’s poems the way his friend had wanted causing a rift in their relationship; causing the narrator to be very upset. The narrator continues to claim that in his anger and rage he found poems. Basically saying that through this conflict he was able to find emotions and words for a poem; and he heavily implies that the result of the conflict is this poem itself. In order for the readers to be able to understand the conflict, the narrator recommends that they “break these words and see”, suggesting that his words are not straight forward and in order to understand the nature of the conflict a proper analysis of his words must be conducted. 000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000

The Story Of The Cat That Drank The Sea by Riyas Qurana The drop that was sucked this afternoon

was the last one. The sea went dry. From the moment the hungry cat in the painting transferred the sea into its stomach the black and white picture turned blue. The sea jumps from one branch to the other. In the gentle warmth of the kitchen sleeps the sea with soft undulating waves. A boy relentlessly chases away the sea. The sea with its tail bouncing, rushes into the street only to be hit by a bus and lies injured on the street. The sea wobbles on the street with waves murmuring softly, softly. I redraw the cat in the painting. The strokes turn into waves Gushing all over the walls.

The Story Of The Cat That Drank The Sea by Riyas Qurana is a free verse poem composed of seventeen lines. A quick glance at the poem will tell the reader that it is about a cat from a black and white painting that dries up the sea by drinking up every

last drop of it. The cat then is referred to as the sea and continues going about its day until it is eventually hit by a bus. It is implied that the cat dies from its injuries and so is redrawn, but this time as the sea itself. The analysis of this poem is divided up into five main parts; mainly discussing the cat that noticeably symbolizes an addict and the ocean that represents the subject of its addiction. Just as the cat devours the ocean and then becomes one with it, an addict devours the subject of its addiction so much so that it defines him and he can no longer be recognized without it. Qurana has used a very simple analogy to uncover the identity crisis an addict faces when he overindulges in his addiction.

The Story Of The Cat That Drank The Sea. Analysis by Noor Rehman

Lines One and Two

The drop that was sucked this afternoon was the last one. The sea went dry.

Qurana opens The Story Of The Cat That Drank The Sea by introducing “the drop” that was sucked dry. The reader supposes that the topic is an ordinary drink only to find that it was the sea that was sucked dry. This is done for a dramatic effect in order to provoke the curiosity of the reader enough so that their attention is on nothing but the upcoming story within the poem. The sea going dry is also the perfect metaphor for difficulty which is a strong theme in this poem. These lines alone announce to the reader that the

account ahead is not a light hearted children’s narrative as the title might have suggested. Furthermore the main character of the poem is yet to be introduced; by introducing the action of the character (sucking the last drop) before introducing the actual character, Qurana is giving more importance to the actions of the cat than the cat itself. This is important to keep in mind as we establish what the cat and the sea signify in the poem. Lines Three to Five

From the moment the hungry cat in the painting transferred the sea into its stomach the black and white picture turned blue.

In line three the main character of the poem is finally introduced, and that too as a “hungry” cat. Hunger is an important adjective in this poem as it exposes the cat to be discontented and unfulfilled, which is imperative in understanding the relationship of the cat and the sea. It is noteworthy that the action the poem opened with was that of drinking but the cat was not described as thirsty, but rather hungry. This is interesting for the reason that the cat didn’t need to drink, let alone the entire sea but did it anyways. Much like the addiction of an addict, he doesn’t need to do what he is doing especially at such a level that could harm him (like the cat that drank the entire sea) but he does it regardless. The subject of his addiction then becomes so tempting that even though he initially had no need for it he ends up indulging in it excessively. The reader is also told that he cat is not a real cat but one that is in a painting. This is significant because although the cat in the painting is supposed to be stationary it moves and lives

a life; moreover an addict could very much be an ordinary person who picks whose subject of addiction is a stationary thing in the lives of the people around him, but for him is as vast and deep as the ocean. Line five is crucial in understanding the nature of an addict as Qurana explains it. Just as the ocean turned the black and white painting of the cat blue, the addiction fills some colour or satisfaction into the life of the addict and that is why it is so hard for him to give it up; he truly believes his world cannot be lively without indulging himself in his addiction. Lines Six to Nine

The sea jumps from one branch to the other. In the gentle warmth of the kitchen sleeps the sea with soft undulating waves. A boy relentlessly chases away the sea.

Here, the narrative gets more fascinating. The narrator describes the sea jumping from branch to branch, which is the natural act of the cat but not the sea. The sea has now taken over the cat, so much so that it is unrecognizable as an animal and is appearing more akin to a body of water. In the beginning of this poem the readers are told that the cat drank the last drop of the sea and here we see that it has taken over the body of the cat. This is an easy parallel to the story of an addict who has taken the last step to going too far and now is drowning in his addiction, so much so that he is unrecognizable as himself and more recognizable by the subject of his addiction. He no longer is an ordinary individual, but rather a functioning addict. The cat in these lines goes about his

day as normally as possible, by jumping on trees, to sleeping in a warm kitchen and having a boy chasing it away. The only thing is that it is not referred to as the cat which is it’s true identity but instead it is recognized as the sea, the subject which it excessively indulged in. this notion is quite significant as it is the fate of an addict who slowly loses himself in his addiction and his true identity is no longer recognizable. Line nine also emphasizes how the cat is then treated from enjoying a nap in the kitchen to being chased away; this falls in line with the life of an addict, who goes from the peaceful comforts of his home to life where others are trying to get rid of him because his demeanor becomes offensive and brings discomfort to those around him. Lines Ten to Fourteen

The sea with its tail bouncing, rushes into the street only to be hit by a bus and lies injured on the street. The sea wobbles on the street with waves murmuring softly, softly.

Line ten illustrates an image of a cat that is hastily on the run without much concern of where it is headed similar to an addict who loses control of the rest of his life due to his addiction and then eventually gets “hit by a bus”, when the rest of his life catches up with him. He then “lies injured on the street”, which is significant because the street is a public place and addict who is ruined at the hands of his addiction usually becomes a lesson for the public eye. The word “wobbles” in line thirteen is symbolizes the instability

in the life of the addict, and his instability is one that is visible to the public. Line fourteen suggests that the cat is dying as a result of its injuries, seeing that the waves (representing the urges of addiction merged with the heartbeat of the addict) become “soft” or light, essentially dying off. Lines Fifteen to Seventeen

I redraw the cat in the painting. The strokes turn into waves Gushing all over the walls.

The last three lines of The Story Of The Cat That Drank The Sea give the narrative an unexpected turn. The narrator of the poem redraws the cat, but when he strokes with the brush, out comes waves instead of the cat that he was trying to paint, and the waves were not soft but wildly gushing all over the walls. This scenario signifies the memories of an addict who dies at the hands of his addiction. After the death of an addict, when the community and family try to “redraw” the person in their memories, the drawing is tainted with the addiction that they excessively indulged in. the memory and image of that individual will never be the same again because of the pain he not only caused himself but to those that surround him. By having the cat disappear all together and be replaced by wild gushing waves that were out of the narrator’s control, Qurana is ending the poem with a strong idea of the lack of control and neglect that resonates the life of the addict. An addict who could not control his impulses and so concluded his life with neglect, irresponsibility, and wild behavior resulting in tainted memories and an outcome that was completely out of his control. Consequently, he becomes an

uncontainable example to those who witnessed his descend and foolish finale to an intricate life. 0000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000

A Text About Reading The Letter by Riyas Qurana

The words crawled like crabs On one half of the paper, the letter was drafted And the sea on the other.

The waves wiped away The foot paths of the words That sauntered on the shore.

Some words hollowed out the papers And razed them off. A few words glided ashore towards the bay.

I was playing like a careless child

Close to the sea, That was bellowing like her memories.

The slithering words on the shoreline Could not be assembled and read.

Some alphabets Some words Some sentences Surfaced on and submerged in the floor, Preventing me to comprehend Whatever she tried to convey.

Perhaps she had written That she never wanted to express Anything that's definite.

Sometimes The waves that leap ahead the paper

Revisit with the same speed.

I often yearn to dive into the paper But vacillate and remain at the shore

Once she had written and forwarded the rain On one sunny day

Her eyes were swimming Far, far off in the paper. And i muse on The way i melted Reading the rain endlessly.

The ground and the ocean That had turned into a letter In this paper Will be my haunt Henceforth.....

A Text About Reading The Letter by Riyas Qurana is a free verse poem with twelve stanzas dedicated to discussing a letter between a lover and his beloved. This poem truly dives into a relationship that never gets true closure and in consequence the individuals are subject to suffering. It is a difficult situation when something so loved and treasured falls apart at the seems and there is nothing that can be done about it; that is exactly what this poem is about.

A Text About Reading The Letter Analysis by Noor Rehman

First Stanza The opening of Qurana’s A Text About Reading The Letter, introduces the letter quite dramatically. The very first line of this stanza mentions that the words in the letter are crawling “like crabs”; Qurana is trying to paint an image of a letter that is unclear, so much so that it feels like the words were moving, sliding or crawling on the paper itself. This also gives the impression that the message in this letter is going to be unclear or at least incomplete. Line two of this stanza lets the reader know that the letter in fact was incomplete as the words were found only on half of the paper . The word “drafted” presents the idea that there was only an outline of the intended message left. Line three confirms that the letter was incomplete because the sea was “on the other” half of the letter; implying that the writing had been washed away. This stanza also informs the reader that the letter in question was either found at sea or traveled through the sea at some point; the letter has a story.

Second Stanza The second stanza of this poem describes in detail the condition of the second half of the letter. Line four explains that the letter truly was washed in the sea as “the waves wiped away” the text within. Line five exposes that the words were completely illegible as even their ‘foot paths” were washed away. Line five concludes the stanza by describing the words as ones that “sauntered on the shore”, this tells the readers that the reader of his letter did not get the intended message and it is as good as left on shore, where perhaps it started its journey in the hands of it’s writer. Even though the poem is just about a letter, it is conveying a story of the people that are deeply connected to its words. Third Stanza Stanza three presents the letter in quite an aggressive manner perhaps mirroring the emotions of aggression that the person who revived the letter must be feeling at the sight of the state of it. Line seven mentions that “some words” had “hollowed out the papers”, this could be literally or it could intend to portray that the words were so intense that they left holes in the text. Line eight continues to describe the letter as being destroyed, so much so that chunks of the words were physically missing where the paper had torn. Line nine is interesting as it depicts the” words gliding ashore towards the bay” implying that the words are not only lost but constantly moving, so that they can keep their story alive and on the move. Fourth Stanza Stanza four is important as it introduces the two main characters of the poem. Line ten is about an individual who describes himself to be carelessly playing like a child; this description exposes that he was aware of the fact that he was being careless and childish in his play, giving the reader some information about the individuals personality.

Line eleven frames the the individual “close to the sea”, automatically connecting him and the letter that has been washed up by the sea. Line twelve finally introduces the second character. there seems to be a woman whose memory the sea is screaming out to the individual. This woman also gets connected to the letter by being so closely related to the sea. In this stanza the reader is able to detect a story of love and loss that perhaps has much to do with the letter and its lost words. Fifth Stanza Stanza five is actually a couplet and underlines the connection of this man, the letter and the sea. Line thirteen mentions “slithering words” this relates to the reader that the words are not friendly or comforting, but rather repulsive and unwelcome. The shoreline seems to be bring back memories and experiences that are difficult for the individual to indulge in. Line fourteen further highlights the unpleasantness of the words by claiming that the words “could not be assembled and read”; basically saying that they didn’t tell a full story, these words were so full of memories and emotion that read without context they did not make much sense. Sixth Stanza Stanza six is the longest stanza in the poem and begins to tell the story of the two characters outside the letter. The individual seems to be hoping and expecting the words to make sense to him as he tries to read them on the floor, because he associates these words to the woman trying to convey her own message to him. The sea seems to be a mediator between the two as they try to communicate and understand each other. however it is also the sea that seems to be interfering with their union and communication as the letter was washed away and the words on the sea shore are hard to comprehend.

Seventh Stanza Here, in stanza seven the man seems to start assuming that the woman does not want to be clear in her communication, perhaps she wants to carry on without defining what it is she wants. Maybe she is happy by keeping him confused and at a distance. The reader can really see the desperation of the man as he tries to find meaning in the little communication he has received from the woman. By now it is safe to assume that the two are or at least were in a romantic relationship and have suffered through losing each other either physically or through lack of communication. Eighth Stanza Stanza eight gives the reader a better understanding of the letter in relation to the characters. The man has received the letter that has been battered by the sea from his beloved or once beloved. The letter has opened up feelings of confusion and lack of closure for the man. The relationship is one that is obviously struggling and the man is being hit by waves of feelings, emotions, scenes of the past that are not helping him at all in understanding this tattered letter. Ninth Stanza Stanza nine is a couplet and focuses on the indecisive emotions of the man and how he feels trapped by them. The man confesses to wanting more specifically “yearning” to dive into the letter, hoping for a better understanding, a better connection with his beloved but has to force himself to stay put. perhaps she chose to walk away and he is doing all he can just to stay on shore and just watch her sail away. Tenth Stanza Stanza ten is powerful as the character displays how much her letters impact him. in this stanza the reader witnesses the power that this woman has over this man. She is

able to change his “sunny day” meaning a day full of life and happiness into one of rain, specifically the rain she was witnessing herself. it seems whenever he communicates with her he is left feeling upset. She drags him down with her when she is suffering. This stanza displays quite clearly the level of the man’s attachment to his woman. Eleventh Stanza Stanza eleven exposes the man and how he still searches for his beloved. He sees her eyes in the letters he receives and can feel the rain that she describes. He is so invested in her that he can feel what she feels and see her in front of him even in her absence. He is hopelessly in love with a woman who seems to be confused in what she wants. Twelfth Stanza The conclusion of this poem exposes that there does not have to be a physical letter from his woman in order for him to remember her or her words. the world around him reminds him of her in every way. everything haunts him because the skies and the oceans are his letters. 0000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000 Tea at Sunrise by Riyas Qurana i wait for the crack of dawn of an expired day. bygones can never be brought back! yet i must!

i walk back from dusk no i only reflect i see nothing for a while oh that must be my seista!

i'm startled though its just a pretension

i'm troubled for, she takes back the letter she bequeathed in dream

yes! it's not like this? the one who gives becomes the recepient as time moves back.

forgive me! lets really contemplate

the sun is at its peak but i wear those dresses that make me warm i pour back the water i bathed, sopped up by the soil back into the well.

the water leaves my hair dry

i cycle backward to the market people move forward gaping at me astounded for they have never tried to meet the expired morn

he and me we walked side by side on our way to market now we walk apart babbling he forward and me backward reaching home.

the birds chirp, and the dawn breaks among the commotion and now i press forward drinking a steaming cup of tea

was not this cup of tea, i missed made me traverse the day forward and rearward not once but twice and again!

Tea at Sunrise by Riyas Qurana is a free verse poem of eleven stanzas written in first person about a sunrise that is anticipated to flip life upside-down. The main character has suffered in life by making decisions that lead her to have a life opposite if what she wanted and so she hopes for a day break that would make everything backwards and give her the happiness she wanted to experience.

Tea at Sunrise Analysis by Noor Rehman First Stanza The first stanza of this poem introduces the setting. There is a character waiting at “the crack of dawn” regretting the day that has just gone by knowing it can never be returned to her. The first line alone emphasizes the importance of her waiting. It represents her anticipation for change, her hope for better. Lines two and three explain exactly what this character is waiting for: “the crack of dawn/ of an expired day”; these lines tell the reader that the character has been through something significant and as a result is desperately waiting for the next day to arrive. Perhaps the character is looking forward to a new beginning. Line four displays an air of regret and nostalgia as she exclaims that things that go by can never be brought back. The reader becomes aware that the character is still hesitant about the new coming day but still desperately awaits it. Line five pursues the suspense the stanza has created by simply admitting that she “must”. She must what? The answer is: wait. The story of her eagerness is yet to unfold throughout the rest of the poem.

Second Stanza The second stanza begins with the character describe her panicked walk. Line seven displays her clouded memory of the event as she quickly explains that no, she didn’t walk but did think about it. At this point the reader is wondering exactly what is causing such panic and anxiety for the character. Line eight continues to drive the suspense as the character declares she has not seen anything for a while; is she looking for something? And if so why is she waiting for it at this hour? The final line of this stanza doesn’t do much to relieve the buildup of suspense as the character exclaims “oh that must be my siesta!”. The slow increase in mystery in the last two stanzas keeps the reader’s attention and also implies that she has a secret that she isn’t willing to expose just yet. Third Stanza Stanza three is a couplet that speaks volumes about the main character. The two lines simply express that upon noticing someone she acts startled, although she is not as she has been waiting for this exact moment in quite the anxiety. She feels the need to act startled to make the situation or encounter seem natural as possible, although that is quite impossible considering the setting. This couplet also suggests that the character is very much in control of the way she is acting despite her panicky demeanour. Fourth Stanza Stanza four unfolds in the very first line that the character is troubled. Right away the reader can tell that something is out of place. She was looking forward to this moment quite desperately, for her to be troubled at this point means she miscalculated something. The story here takes a turn. It seems that she is watching herself take back a letter that she had once “bequeathed”. This stanza is very confusing as the character

refers to herself in third person. “In dream” here is suggesting that the event of handing down the letter never actually took place and was actually a figment of her imagination. Fifth Stanza Here in the fifth stanza a very interesting concept is introduced by the character. Apparently as time moves backwards it undo’s what happens and flips the scenario so the recipient becomes the one who gives. It seems that either the character is trapped in wishful thinking or she has reached an alternate reality in which everything she was running away from while hoping for the new day has turned backwards so that not only is everything undone but it reverses the events causing opposite circumstances to take place. One would only wish for such reality if they had made many mistakes they wished to not only erase but flip around to change the course of events. Sixth Stanza The sixth stanza yet again takes a turn as the character asks for forgiveness and asks the reader to join her as she “really” contemplates. As the reader makes it to this part of the poem he or she realizes that the main character is not only unpredictable but untrustworthy. She seems to jump from one place to the next without explaining herself or her train of thought. She asks for forgiveness without giving a reason almost as if to say she understands that she does not make much sense. Then, she asks the reader to join in contemplation, hopefully to clarify her story as so far the reader knows nothing more than confusion and anxiety. Seventh Stanza In stanza seven the character describes the sun being at its peak, so probably a time in the afternoon when it gets the warmest. The setting has changed to a time in the afternoon in which she knows is hot but chooses to wear a dress that is not suited to the

weather. The diction implies that this is a common occurrence for her. Remember that things are still playing out backwards, so instead of it being cold and her wearing clothing that is for warmer weather the opposite is happening. She goes to take a shower but the water is being poured back into the well and leaves her hair dry instead of wet. This stanza allows the reader to get a view of her day but in a manner that completely misconstrues the events. Eighth Stanza Stanza eight continues in the absurd reality that he character is narrating. She cycles backwards to the market, meaning she had left there in reality. In this market that she is wheeling into backwards, there are people who stare at her shocked because they have never met a person who was suffering internally. The reader can interpret he stanza as the character cycling through the market place and no on e actually noticed her because it is so common for people to suffer internally for whatever the reason. This stanza helps the reader understand that the character felt ignored and lonely. Ninth Stanza In the ninth stanza the character reminisces walking side by side through the market p lace with her significant other. Now, in this alternate reality she claims they walk separately speaking a language of no importance, hence her reference to babbling. The important point in this stanza is that the reach home; this tells the reader that she probably never reached a place of comfort or homeliness with her significant other. Again the reader gets a little window to examine the desperation she shows in the first stanza, she never truly made it home the man she wished to walk side by side with.

Tenth Stanza Stanza ten paints a completely new picture in regards to the loss and hurt that have been mentioned in the previous stanzas. Here she sits drinking a warm cup of tea as the birds chirp and the dawn brings calmness to the scene. If the reader continues to translate this stanza as the previous ones it seems that the never got her cup of tea and the calmness that she probably so desired in her life. This also tells the reader that she wanted her life to be full of scenes of nature and life and simple happiness but never actually got to experience it. Eleventh Stanza Stanza eleven is the final stanza of this poem and concludes the character’s story by expressing to the reader that it wasn’t just a cup of tea that she missed out on that is causing her to wish for the opposites and backwardness. It was so much more than that and so she does not regret this alternate reality and would visit or create it multiple times. 000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000

Surveillance by Riyas Qurana There is no inhalation here Can't breathe Now and then air would come this way but would at once be chased away That which we want to say

We eat those words with hunger proving unbearable. How we should live is decided by them. They decide the mode of our Death too. We have but their hands We walk with their legs This stomach alone is ours In the streets In the interior rooms of houses On the walls Fences Why even in the air their eyes are stuck We are being watched A kiss given in the bedroom shocks as if it is happening In the midst of a huge crowd. That all this is the figment of imagination is how these lines ought to be brought to a close

Surveillance by Riyas Qurana is a twenty four line free verse poem that discusses and highlights the claustrophobia that comes along with the concept of surveillance. It becomes even more hard to bear when it is social standards and cultural pressures that are the ones constantly monitoring how you express yourself. Surveillance Analysis by Noor Rehman Lines 1 to 2 Qurana’s Surveillance is introduced with the idea of suffocation. In the first two lines Qurana is expressing the intensity of what being constantly watched by others actually feels like. He specifically mentions not being able to inhale, this is important because the action of inhaling is a type of absorption of one’s surroundings or environment; by mentioning that inhalation is not taking place Qurana is implying that it is difficult for someone under surveillance to be able to get comfortable in his environment. The second line is just two words but they are heavy to read. “can’t breathe” relays to the readers that there is a story that is yet to unfold and it contains the reason behind the suffocation the narrator is facing. Line two also suggests that someone is in the process of dying in a situation where they are still trying to breathe. Had the narrator given up on life he would have said he stopped breathing, instead he used the word “can’t” which portrays effort still being made to breathe; implying that the narrator is fighting to survive. Lines 3 to 4 Lines three and four of Qurana’s poem continues to describe the impact surveillance is having on the narrator. He speaks of a sense of relief “now and then” as he gets some space to breathe; however, he makes it clear that someone or something made sure it did not last very long. These lines help the reader understand that the character is not suffering due to his own actions but rather the actions of someone else. It is safe to

assume the relief that the character is able to get is when he isn’t being watched so carefully, and the one watching him rarely takes any breaks. Although the reader is unaware of whom the character is and who is watching him, it is still easy to understand the discomfort and suffocation that comes along with not being given any breathing room. By not exposing who is doing the surveillance Qurana is allowing the reader to make this narration their own by stepping into the character’s shoes. This permits the reader to associate their own story with the character, whether it is family, friends or society in general that is smothering their own space. Lines 5 to 7 The next three lines are pretty clear that the character feels he must even monitor his speech as a result of being watched so carefully. It is interesting however, the diction that Qurana has chosen to describe his silence. The narrator is claiming to “eat” the words that he wants to say, and that the hunger he has being proven as “unbearable”. The circumstance of the character seems to be so extreme or he at least feels that way. It seems that no matter how many of his own words he has to “eat” or keep silent about his appetite intensifies because he becomes increasingly paranoid about what he should or should not say. Eventually he will reach a point where his appetite will not leave any words for him that he can use; essentially meaning that he will not feel like sharing anything he has to say because they will feel inadequate for the public to receive. This stanza highlight’s the fact that the narrator feels judged on his words and opinions alongside being constantly watched and judged for his actions.

Lines 8 to 9 Lines eight and nine are more sinister as they spitefully consider the situation of the character. It is obvious that the narrator is having a hard time with his circumstances

and hates being under a watchful eye at all times. These two lines inform the reader of the fact that the character is not being watched by one person but by a “them”; at this point in the poem the reader can consider them to be social and cultural standards and pressures. Moreover, these lines suggest that he is not the only one suffering as he mentions “we”. The narrator is explaining how absurd it is that he must act and speak a certain way or in a certain manner in order to live and be accepted by “them”, this does not make sense to him as he doesn’t think a person can live a fulfilling life if he is not given the freedom to be himself. Social and cultural standards are important to anyone’s identity because it helps define their identity, however, the pressures of cultures and societies to be a specific way cannot be supported because of the reason that illuminates an individual’s right to express themselves authentically without the fear of being outcasted. Lines 10 to 16 Lines ten and eleven continue with the sarcastic and spiteful tone as they paint a picture of utter control. By claiming that “we have but their hands/we walk with their legs” the narrator is stressing the concept of complete control over a life that is not yours. Hands and legs are a crucial part of the human body that help people with their tasks that they have to manage for basic everyday life; by stating that he doesn’t even have his own hands and legs, he is displaying the extremity of his situation while highlighting how little control he has over his own basic tasks without the interference of social and cultural standards and pressures. Lines twelve through sixteen express that the only thing he feels actually belongs to himself is his stomach, this is an interesting point as the basic function of the stomach is to digest the food entering the body. Fundamentally the narrator is stating that the only thing he feels is left in his control is his ability to “digest” the standards and pressures that are being forcefully fed to him. His process of breaking down the expectations being thrown at him to a level that he understands them

is purely and solely his own, untouched by anyone. It stays that way whether he be outdoors or indoors and it is the only thing he feels truly confident about. Lines 17 to 19 Lines seventeen through nineteen paint a very striking image of eyes stuck in the sky. This imagery is a powerful way to describe the intensity of the gaze that social and cultural standards/pressures have set on every individual who desires to stay connected to them. Line seventeen is important because it suggests that the very air that every person breathes in is tainted heavily by society’s eye. By stating that “their eyes are stuck” the narrator suggest that these standards and pressures are jammed in one place and do not conform to individual needs. They are just permanently there. Line nineteen is a statement that is presented for the first time in the poem that actually expresses being watched; for a poem titled Surveillance this is an important point as displays that the narrator is finally comfortable enough with the reader and to plainly explain his situation. Lines 20 to 22 The next three lines are important because it exposes the lengths to which social norms and standards go in order to interfere with someone’s life. The impact of cultures and societies is that it assists in building a person’s identity, character and personal morals; even when a person is not surrounded by people and is in the comfort of his own home he is influenced by the social and cultural norms he has grown up around. These lines specifically seem to be those of annoyance with a hint of guilt as the narrator confesses to a secret kiss and how it didn’t stay very secret because he felt the judgement of society and culture on this most private intimate act.

Lines 23 to 24 The closing lines of this poem don’t conclude the conflict in the poem. The narrator is rightfully quite upset with his experience and wishes that the pressures of culture and society didn’t exist so that no one would have to feel like they need to meet a specific standard in order to be accepted as a part of the community or even family. Why can’t these restrictions to individual freedom be just a “figment of imagination” so that people can just put aside what others have to say and be authentically themselves? The narrator wishes he could close the poem by telling his readers that his experience wasn’t real but unfortunately that isn’t the case. 0000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000

When The Rain Started Drizzling Into His Story by Riyas Qurana When walking on the plain of grass Passing beyond the hilltop, The rain started to drizzle over the tree That stands only in his story. No sooner reached the point Than the rain started to leak down the leaves And the grass cropped up From the point the tree stood. The birds hidden into the clouds

Coming out to sing sitting on the tree. Singing voice of the birds reach the ear Little by little. In a fraction of second, they might come And how to make a tree grown up With the seed planted.

Floating in the air I become the tree stretching my hands as branches And legs going down beneath The birds come to sit upon me Flapping their wings and singing. She came with the birds looking for me. Each word of her song comes out struggling And weeping

If you turn the pages of his book You would see his lover roaming about All over the story.

When The Rain Started Drizzling Into His Story by Riyas Qurana is a three stanza free verse poem about growth and moving on. This poem focuses on a character’s journey of coming out of a hard place in life and having the strength to rebuild his identity so that he can experience the a fresh new start with the possibility of new opportunities that will bring back the happiness in his life. This poem promotes self growth and the power of redefining your identity to become stronger despite all the things that tried to pull you down. When The Rain Started Drizzling Into His Story Analysis by Noor Rehman First Stanza Qurana starts the first stanza by giving the reader a visual of the environment the character is surrounded by. This description is important because not only does it set the mood for the poem but the environment is a symbol for the internal journey that the character is experiencing. Line one opens the poem with an image of soft footsteps on a grassy field; signifying the smooth natural adventures of life that every individual experiences throughout their existence. The concept of walking represents life moving forward as a person continues to exist day in and day out. The second line mentions “passing a hilltop”, this hilltop can easily embody hardships that one faces, the bumps on the road that are unavoidable in any persons journey through life. By indicating that the character is “passing beyond” the hill, Qurana is revealing to the reader that the character has been through his bump in the road or difficulty and it is now behind him. Line three illustrates a new image of rain drizzling over a tree. This image is extremely important as it lets the reader experience the emotional circumstance that the character is experiencing. The tree is a symbol of his new beginning, it represents the person he can be if he lets go of the hurt he experienced from his hardship and embrace the

lessons he has learned and grow into a better, wiser, stronger individual. The rain in this line also helps promote the idea of a new beginning and washing away the past. Line four clarifies that the tree is his new identity as he grows as a person and moves on from his past because it states that this tree “stands only in his story” implying that no one else can have that tree in their story because they are not this character and have not experienced or lived what he has, each individual has their own trees in their stories. Lines five to eight continue to explain the journey as they paint a picture of the character walking up to the tree and witnessing the rain dripping off the leaves of the tree and the grass was not as luscious under the shade of the tree. This image is a clear symbol of the character’s new identity. As his new identity awaits to be embraced (the tree), it is dripping in the rain of new beginnings. The grass not being soft and new under the tree signifies that the character is not moving through smooth adventures of life anymore, he has experienced hardship and learned to move on so the grass is “cropped” right where his new identity is standing. The next two lines depict the turn of events for the character after he passes his hilltop and reaches his new identity through the birds coming out of the clouds to sit and sing on the tree. The singing birds represent a new day and the new opportunities that come along with it. Qurana describes the birds coming out of hidden clouds, this could imply two things. The first being that the new opportunities in his life now are coming out of the characters difficulties and hardships that he experienced; or that these new opportunities are coming out of places he never thought were possible for him since the clouds (possibly his ambitious dreams) are described as “hidden”. By having these birds sitting on a tree that signifies the character’s new identity Qurana is pointing out that when the character moves on and decides to embrace his hardships and grow into a new person because of them, he is also embracing a life full of new opportunities that he cannot access if he holds on to his past. Lines eleven and twelve expose that the voice of these birds are reaching the character “little by little” entailing that he is slowly starting to accept and embrace this

tree with its birds. He is acknowledging his new identity and is beginning to see the blessing of new opportunities that accompany it. Line thirteen is a little more ambiguous as Qurana states that at any moment “they might come”; the “they” symbolizes his past experiences and people who remind him of his disappointments , which he does not want catching up to him. The last two lines of the stanza is showcasing the concept of growing into a new person by suggesting that by the simple fact of wanting to grow into a new person the character has planted a seed for his tree. Indicating that the character has fully accepted the idea of a new identity and the freedoms that come along with it, leaving behind the negativity he has experienced. Second Stanza The second stanza of this poem switches into first person probably to bring the experience that the character is going through to a more intimate and genuine level for the reader. Line sixteen depicts the character floating in the air. Which is highly significant to the character’s journey as it embodies the lightness that character feels at accepting the new identity that is full of new beginnings for him. By choosing to move on the character has left behind the burdens of negativity, damage and heart ache that he had experienced so far, resulting in a weightlessness that allows him to rise up. Line seventeen initiates the account of the character’s transformation. He stretches to have his hands become the branches of the tree; by explaining the process Qurana is highlighting the importance of the transformation for the character. It is an experience that he has to process in order to embody his new identity. Line eighteen continues to illustrate his transformation with his legs becoming the trunk growing its roots underground. This line informs the reader that his new identity is not a phase but a true transformation that has a strong foundation due to his past experiences and his ability to let go and move forward. The next two lines express his successful embodiment of the tree as the birds that represented new experiences and opportunities come towards the

character and settle on him signing freely celebrating his new beginning. The reason the mentioning of the birds singing and flapping their wings is so important is because it highlights that things do get better when a person chooses to grow and chooses to accept the possibility of a much better future by giving life another chance through optimism. Line twenty one really allows the reader to glance into the past to view the hilltop that the character had just passed before owning this new identity. It becomes apparent in this line that his hilltop was a relationship that didn’t go the way he had anticipated and now that he has moved on and is looking forward to the freedoms new opportunities will bring him, “she” comes looking for him. The reader can understand that the “she” here is his previous love and she is now here with a song of her own, except hers is described as “struggling” to come out and “weeping” in lines twenty two and twenty three. Perhaps she is regretful of losing him and is trying to get him back, the possibility if the character returning to her seems highly unlikely as he does not hear her song as one that is beautiful and enticing rather it reaches him broken and “struggling” proving that he has truly moved on. Third Stanza The third stanza returns to being in third person and concludes the story by revealing the past of the character. Line twenty four begins to explain to the reader that every person is the author of their book of life and this poem helps others take a look into the book of this specific character. Lines twenty five and twenty six discuss that if the reader turns the “pages of his book”, meaning the character’s book of life so far (as he has just embodied a new beginning so the rest of the “book” is yet to be written.) it becomes clear that “she” (his lover) was a prominent part of his story. By disclosing that this woman has been a big part of the character’s past Qurana is promoting the message that it is possible to move on and see yourself with a new identity even after you let go of a relationship that you invested so much time and effort into. Furthermore, you can

choose your identity and redefine yourself as many times as you need to in your lifetime. 0000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000 A Bird That Was Most Used Up by Riyas Qurana It is a bird that was most used up Yet, it is still not damaged and in good condition for years. As though it is drawn and drawn Used and used again and again You see, not a single strand of feather lost.

It is the bird to show you changing its color, each moment as you wink your eyes She is rushed out at an early daybreak Then only, the mending work in the painting is done. She ate all the colors in painting At night

Same thing happened the other day she pecked and pecked all the words of a song and ate up, The song I wrote

The greatness of a language And its paintings, Are most used by this bird Yet she is still in good condition And without any damage made

Probably, you would have guessed Which this bird is. If not, no time left for you to guess Any more. Stop reading and get lost. ‘Cos, it is the time for lines of poems To develop and float In this bird and to take rest.

A Bird That Was Most Used Up by Riyas Qurana is a four stanza poem about creativity. Qurana believes his creative ability to be far superior to other artists and illustrates himself and his creativity as an infinite source of greatness in his poetic writing. The entire poem is soaking in the narrator’s prideful airs as he discusses his creativity under the disguise of a bird. A Bird That Was Most Used analysis By Noor Rehman First Stanza The first stanza of this poem opens up by introducing the main subject: the bird. This stanza describes the condition of this bird whilst giving the reader an idea of what the bird is a metaphor for. The very first line tells the reader that the bird is something that is used often; giving the reader a reason to believe it represents something that is common and perhaps found in everyday life. Lines two and three are quick to inform the reader that despite the constant use of this bird it is still in very good condition has been in good condition for many years now. The second clue that is given here is that this bird is seemingly infinite; although it is used continuously, it does not become weary. This translates to the fact that this bird represents a nontangible item; if it was an object or tool it would definitely have some wear and tear over the course of the years that it has been in use. Lines four through six underline the idea that it is used often and still has not lost even a feather, allowing the readers to comprehend the infinite use this bird has. Although it is difficult for a reader to say from the first stanza alone, the rest of the poem helps to suggest that the bird in this poem represents creativity. In the first stanza alone, the idea of the bird being a metaphor for creativity makes sense. The bird or creativity is constantly used by individuals but here especially the narrator as he relays his words through a creative means: a poem. It looks as if the narrator is speaking about his own creativity and creative writing when he claims that he uses it a lot and it

has remained in good condition (meaning he hasn’t run out of ideas). Line four reinforces this idea as it highlights that the narrator continues to draw out his creativity without depleting it, almost as if to show off his ability to maintain it. The first stanza is tainted with arrogant airs as the narrator professes the value of his bird or creativity. Second Stanza The second stanza here describes the narrator’s bird in further detail, allowing the reader to understand the nature of it. Lines seven to nine open the second stanza with the idea that that the bird changes colours as frequently as a person blinks their eyes. Here the message being relayed is that of creativity as an abstract existence that continues to change shape or form depending on what it is needed for. That is the beauty of imagination, originality, and creativity, it continues to grow and change based on the lengths that an individual is willing to work with it. Line ten proclaims that it starts working at daybreak, which is true as creativity or creative writing works from the moment the artist wakes and sometimes even when he is asleep (maintaining its existence through his dreams). The word “rushed” also explains the nature of the narrator’s personal creativity, it gives readers the impression that he starts his days with a rush of ideas for his writings and the ideas and the work is endless and in a hurry to be drawn out. Lines eleven and twelve illustrate the notion that in order for any artwork to be entirely complete the creative juices need to start their work at daybreak just like the bird that Qurana speaks of. This is an interesting idea and really allows for the readers to get a better idea of the narrator’s work ethics and his beliefs of creativity being a driving force and not just a simple tool for an artist (of visual and written art). It is obvious here that the narrator believes that his creativity is responsible for his work whilst he himself becomes the tool, this becomes apparent as he describes the bird rushing out at daybreak and the bird doing the mending of the art pieces. Lines thirteen and fourteen express that by the end of the day the bird devours the colours of the

artwork, this implies that the narrator’s creativity completely takes over his art as his day comes to an end. Lines fifteen to eighteen conclude the stanza by revealing to the readers that the narrator is a lyrical or song artist too (aside from his poetic art) and that his creativity completely consumed the song, implying that he thinks very highly of it. Again, an arrogant or prideful tone is noticed as he professes his talents and creativity. Third Stanza The fourth stanza is initiated by acknowledging the greatness of language and art. As the reader has already been introduced to the pride the narrator openly and freely displays whilst he conveys his strong ideas about his work of art, it is not surprising that he proclaims the greatness of writing and art. By line twenty-one the reader is very familiar with the bird being a clear embodiment of his creative art. This line specifically is driving the message that the narrator believes that his personal creativity is “most used by” the “greatness” of his language and what that language is able to paint: poems. It is clear that the narrator not only thinks very highly of his poems but also is very confident in publicly claiming that his poems are drenched in his creativity. The last two lines of this stanza not only conclude his thoughts but also re-emphasize the congratulatory airs that he gives himself on his self proclaimed prominence in the field of poetic art. Line twenty two emphasizes his pride in keeping his creative juices consistent and in “good condition”, while the following line underlines that there is zero “damage” done to his creativity as he continues to use it so powerfully in his poems. This entire stanza is used by the narrator to simply boast about his creative abilities and essentially that he has never faced writers block and he doesn’t see it in his future either. By continuously bringing up his talents (that he continues to claim he possesses) in his poem the narrator is obviously putting in all of his efforts to convince his readers that he is a superior writer, quite possibly to validate himself and his poetry.

Fourth Stanza The final stanza of this poem continues to display a prideful tone except it becomes very arrogant and rude towards the readers at this point. The first two lines the narrator speaks in an almost taunting voice suggesting that the reader should have guessed what the bird symbolized in his poem by now. Lines twenty-five and twenty-six continue the taunt by stating that the time has run out for the reader to put together an answer, this is because the poem has come to an end. The narrator is quick to assume that readers will not pick up the symbolic significance of his bird, almost as though he wants them not o understand so he can gloat in his superiority. Line twenty-eight is the most aggressive line in the entire poem and also is evidence of the narrator’s arrogance and want of being superior over others especially his readers. He finally concludes his poem by declaring that he has to put his pen down so that his creativity can rest. It becomes evident at this point that the narrator has painted a self image of greatness and magnitude, so much so that he even includes belittling tones through his art for his audience. He becomes an attention seeking, power hungry, self-promoting individual who cannot relate to his readers as he uses the poem to bring up a wall between himself and the rest of the world. 0000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000 Reminiscence Of My Mother, Filling In Blank by Riyas Qurana I created the night with light And light with night. I created the sea with smoke and hill with water The sky with earth

And earth with clouds.

I created trees with air and air with leaves Men are embedded with wombs in my town.

Everything happen on order made by women there Gods are cursed to wander about from tree to tree naked.

Birds are the only vehicle in the town You could notice animals being cultivated In a corner of the town and flourishing One of the sisters of Eva announced over there That she found the eleventh knowledge

Only male child is born out of wombs of men And they keep their children tying to their tails Till they grow up.

Women are not born and they keep ascending Direct from the heaven above The account of the life in this town Is only a day with seven nights. It is beyond thousands of light years.

No death for women in my town Men lick and lick the heels of women To last long Lest they are no more.

Women get up in the down and shake off their flowing hair down the earth and hurl on the ground as stars It is the food for the men I am looking forward When do you come to visit my town The town appears breathing in vapor and then disappears.

Reminiscence Of My Mother, Filling In Blank by Riyas Qurana is a free verse poem written in first person with ten stanzas that conveys the story of the narrator missing his mother so he dreams up a world in which women, in general, would be superior beings that would bless the earth. Perhaps his mother did not live an ideal life, so he is now creating a world in which she would be honored. The title of the poem is the only thing that allows the reader to understand that this poem is dedicated to the narrator’s mother; “Filling in Blank” could easily be portraying that this poem fills in the blanks of his mother’s life; it is everything he wanted and wished for her to have experienced. Reminiscence Of My Mother, Filling In Blank Analysis By Noor Rehman First Stanza The first stanza of this poem is actually a couplet. This couplet introduces the imaginary world the narrator is creating throughout the poem. Line one states that he has created the night with light, possibly implying that he decorated the night sky with the light of the stars. Line two continues his creation of the night sky by stating that he has created the light with the night. Because this is impossible, it gives the reader a glimpse of what the rest of the poem contains. Through this couplet, the reader is informed that the narrator is responsible for creating the world the reader is going to be exposed to throughout the poem. This couplet also displays the logic that is to be expected for the rest of the stanzas: misconstrued ideologies about what the world should be like in the eyes of the narrator. By openly declaring himself to be the creator the narrator is relaying that the poem is very personal and he is very invested in its story.

Second Stanza The second stanza consists of three lines that continue to emphasize the impossibility of the creation the narrator is taking credit for. Line three stresses that the narrator feels fully in charge of his creation and does not set any logical boundaries for his fabrication. He claims to build a sea with smoke and a hill with water, this imagery suggests that his world is quite mystical or magical with waves coming in made of smoke and water standing tall in the form of hills. He continues his bizarre claims by stating that the put the sky together from pieces of the earth and build the earth with clouds. The reader is left to imagine the sky being land, whilst people walk on clouds, literally. This image truly proves that the narrator is trying to paint a picture that is very far from reality. Third Stanza The third stanza moves on to describing what resides in this world the narrator has created. He mentions the trees, which are a common symbol for growth and roots are made with air, implying they don’t exist. The air that people breathe in is further described to be made of leaves. Notice that if the trees are made of air the leaves of the trees air also made of air, so essentially the narrator is just stating that the air is made of air, perhaps he wants a little bit of normality if he wishes anyone (including his mother) to survive in this world. The second line in this couplet introduces a very absurd idea, that the men would be embedded with wombs, perhaps he wants to rid the woman of the struggle of carrying a child and having her body grow it. On the other hand, he could want to honour men with the opportunity to create another human.

Fourth Stanza The fourth stanza explains the role of women in this supernatural and bizarre world. The narrator now reveals that he wants a world where women are the center of management. They control what happens and administer what needs to be taken care of. The second line in this stanza states that the Gods are then cursed ( by him or the women) to roam from tree to tree. This is an obvious reference to the story of Adam and Eve. By flipping the role of man and god and also throwing a curse in the “life” of gods the reader can note the anger or resentment the narrator seems to harbor against a higher power. Perhaps his mother is no longer alive and with him, so he misses her whilst blaming the gods for his situation. Fifth Stanza The narrator continues his out of the ordinary construction of his imaginary world. He states he has made it so that birds are the only means of traveling and animals are grown instead of food and that women are continuing the pursuit of knowledge and growing as individuals. It seems the only good that the narrator’s world has is the women and their lifestyles. The reason for that could be because he has dedicated this poem to the memories of his mother, implying that she loved birds and was highly intelligent and always wanted to advance in her education by exploring it further. Sixth Stanza The sixth stanza gets even more weird as the narrator declares that no man could give birth to a woman, that the men would breed men and keep their children close by until they are no longer children. Here it seems that the narrator wants to honour women to a degree that they have no connection with men altogether, almost as if the men are not worthy of giving birth to a woman. This is quite the flip in many societies as many cultures prefer male children over female children. Perhaps the narrator is including this

in his world to spite this social trend, and that is why he stresses that the male children are not given any freedoms until adulthood. Seventh Stanza The narrator conveys his message of the importance of women quite clearly here in the seventh stanza. He freely declares that women don’t even go through the process of natural birth, they are actually descending from above, as majestically as the reader van possibly imagine. The narrator is then quick to discuss that even night and day has complete different rules in his world, every day has seven nights and is completely not comprehensible by any reader. This is done to underline how far-fetched the narrator is willing to go in memory of his mother; it is possible she loved night more than day so he has amplified it in his fabricated world. Eighth Stanza This stanza probably would not sit well with many readers as he degrades men. It makes the reader wonder what happened in the life of the narrator that could cause him to be so vile. In this eighth stanza, he proclaims no death for women while painting a very disturbing image of men continuously licking the heels of women in order to stay alive, because they will seize to exists if they choose to stop. It is very possible that most men let down his mother in her lifetime and even hurt her and the narrator is taking revenge by creating this alternate reality where they would not survive unless they worshipped her. Ninth Stanza The narrator continues to bash and degrade men in the ninth stanza as he decides that the food for men will be excess stars that fall out from a woman’s hair. It is not explained

why he is so harsh to his own gender but it is obvious that he is full of rage and has deep wounds inflicted by men and he does not want any good for men in general now. Tenth Stanza The tenth stanza is the very last stanza and speaks to the reader directly. The narrator invites the reader to his fictitious town by stating that one will find it existent in vapor. This could easily suggest that the narrator is saying the only way to find a place like this is if a person is intoxicated, which is truly understandable. 000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000 72 Pages.